Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
What happens if he gets killed by Werewolf, or Veteran (Unique roles). What will you become?sh99er wrote:Become a Freeman and then follow your saviours goal
Ralozey wrote:Alright... Lets see...
What happens if you get killed and and your slave master dies afterwards (by SK for example) and SK win. Do you win aswell?
Is your master a Neutral role or can it be Town or Mafia aswell?What happens if he gets killed by Werewolf, or Veteran (Unique roles). What will you become?sh99er wrote:Become a Freeman and then follow your saviours goal
Some questions on which I'd like to get some answers, before I vote.
~Ralozey
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
TheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this game:
Good concept, very unique.
Very similar to an executioner, but with a role change involved (Not necessarily good or bad, from my point of view.)
The concept is interesting, the mechanics are unique, but the very existence of slaves in the game could create extreme controversy.
Perhaps use the same mechanic in a different way (one that won't offend people)?
I think your best course of action is just to keep the role an "Orphan." Leave slavery out of it and you should be fine.
"Indentured servant" works too. Or just "Servant." Those were popular back when the US was being colonized.
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
I guess if you were to change the name it would be quite a good roleTheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this game
I think this should be changed, so the Cosig knows who the mafia has to kill, for them to gain another mafia member.sh99er wrote:Consig : Your target was whipped and forced to do hard labour by an unknown person last night, they must be a Slave!
BS4125 wrote:I like this role, it's quite unique
Questions/Feedback:
1) What happens when your target commits suicide/dies from guilt what happens to the Slave? You will become a survivor!
2) What happens if a unique role kills you (Veteran, Jailor, Mafioso, Godfather)? You can't become them because there would then be more than one of them in the game
(If anyone killed slave, slave would lose xD unless it already became it's saviours role then if the saviour wins they obviously win too), if you mean what happens if a unique role kills your master then reread additional info (xD 2 people have asked me this now)
Just some things to consider
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
Ralozey wrote:I guess if you were to change the name it would be quite a good roleTheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this gameI think this should be changed, so the Cosig knows who the mafia has to kill, for them to gain another mafia member.sh99er wrote:Consig : Your target was whipped and forced to do hard labour by an unknown person last night, they must be a Slave!
/support
~Ralozey
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
TheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this game:
frop418 wrote:FMLSheWas12 wrote:frop418 wrote:What do you guys find scummy about Sevo?
What do you think of S0me0ne's opinion on Sevo?
He pointed a lot of interesting points.
TheWolfBuddy wrote:TheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this game:
OH GOD MY SIDES
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
sh99er wrote:TheWolfBuddy wrote:TheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this game:
OH GOD MY SIDES
??? What do you mean OH GOD MY SIDES!? Just confused xD and this role isn't based on black slaves, I don't why calling a role: slave, automatically makes it a black American Slave...
TheMajesticSammie wrote:sh99er wrote:TheWolfBuddy wrote:TheMajesticSammie wrote:So- ignoring the fact that this role will openly trigger every black American who plays this game:
OH GOD MY SIDES
??? What do you mean OH GOD MY SIDES!? Just confused xD and this role isn't based on black slaves, I don't why calling a role: slave, automatically makes it a black American Slave...
Well, the Salem Witch Trials took place in an American town called Salem, in the same time period when slaves were still a thing. If you were to be accurate to the place and time period, you would, well... I'm getting uncomfortable now. Please just let it go.
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
Spectre0 wrote:If you go ahead and get triggered by the word "Slave", you deserve to be triggered, and I do not feel bad at all about upsetting you.
Scientedfic wrote:Spectre0 wrote:If you go ahead and get triggered by the word "Slave", you deserve to be triggered, and I do not feel bad at all about upsetting you.
But you'll be surprised at how many people do get triggered by that word. I personally don't, but you'll be very surprised.
In the Salem Witch Trial years, slavery was beginning, but hardly existent. It was much more about indentured servitude (as far as I know in The Crucible the only slave seen is Tituba, whereas there were at least 10 (?) indentured servants seen. Of course, there were more than just 1 slave, but there were far more servants of that time.
I still agree that the name should be changed, simply for the courtesy of others. "Servant" works best.
Now... onto criticism.
It's quite unique, and the concept is workable in the ToS.
However, it's not completely original, from what I see. It looks like you meshed in executioner and amnesiac together with a few modifications. That's not to say that it's bad: the consigiliere is a buffed investigator, after all, and they are in different factions. Seeing that this is a neutral benign role, it's a different faction from the executioner, but not so from the amnesiac. Perhaps try to make more modifications (up to you; I can't really think of anything for the momento)?
Technically, the ability you mentioned isn't really an ability. Would this be unique? Would it be night immune (I'm presuming no)?
Now, I feel that this role is a weakened amnesiac, to an extent. The fact that your win factor initially entirely depends on your "master's" death is hard enough. The fact that you can't choose the role afterwards makes this even harder. To counter this, the slave should be night immune until his/her master is dead, at which point fate is left up to whether the person killing the master is immune or not (it most likely won't, unless it's a serial killer or arsonist).
Having detection immunity is entirely unnecessary. Since the slave is a neutral benign role, the sheriff will automatically see not suspicious. You might as well take it out.
If you were to take my advice and make the slave night-immune until the master is dead, the slave should have bite immunity. However, if you decide not to, then there should not be bite immunity. Vampires can reach out to any benign role, so the slave might as well be a vampire, too.
Investigator results: It really does not match up. I feel that it should instead be Sheriff, Executioner, Werewolf, Slave. This is because your initial state as a slave functions much like an executioner, so you might as well try to cover yourself up if needed. Alternatively, you could do Lookout, Forger, Amnesiac, Slave, as you have already done.
It's impossible for an amnesiac to visit anyone. Just saying.
Overall, it's not bad. Just needs some tweaking, and I think it can be referred to the mods! Congratulations!
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
randomguyhavingfun wrote:Interesting concept but something doesn't seem right to me. You shouldn't become your masters role. I am debating whether you should become a witch or survivor or something. Maybe your killers role? It's just odd to be forced to kill someone so you can replace them. No role should have 2 conflicting goals. Oh and just so this role has some more stuff to do in order for it to think more and effect the game more I got an idea. What if you can chose to do your masters action for the night? Much like a mafioso that can select whether he wants to perform us action. This could also grant you immunity from killers aimed directly at you but if your master is a bg or chooses a vet or wws target pr something it can backfire. Not too sure about this one. As for the invest results I support the framer jester vamp one.
/support
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
randomguyhavingfun wrote:Then I officially cannot read. but what if he is werewolf? Witch? That doesn't sound well
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
sh99er wrote:randomguyhavingfun wrote:Then I officially cannot read. but what if he is werewolf? Witch? That doesn't sound well
Master cannot be immune roles or amnesiac jester and executioner and if ww is his saviour read again you become witch
randomguyhavingfun wrote:sh99er wrote:randomguyhavingfun wrote:Then I officially cannot read. but what if he is werewolf? Witch? That doesn't sound well
Master cannot be immune roles or amnesiac jester and executioner and if ww is his saviour read again you become witch
That is what I am saying. It's unfair to the ww
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
sh99er wrote:randomguyhavingfun wrote:sh99er wrote:randomguyhavingfun wrote:Then I officially cannot read. but what if he is werewolf? Witch? That doesn't sound well
Master cannot be immune roles or amnesiac jester and executioner and if ww is his saviour read again you become witch
That is what I am saying. It's unfair to the ww
But it cannot become werewolf as its Unique and it would be unfair. And it cannot become survivor as that is for when you have no real killer. Witch is the only role that works here. Unless i said slave becomes werewolf....and that as i said is not fair.
randomguyhavingfun wrote:sh99er wrote:randomguyhavingfun wrote:Then I officially cannot read. but what if he is werewolf? Witch? That doesn't sound well
Master cannot be immune roles or amnesiac jester and executioner and if ww is his saviour read again you become witch
That is what I am saying. It's unfair to the ww
Jezz wrote:Godfather: mafioso, make me a sandwich
Mafioso: ...we kinda should kill one of our enemies tonight sir
Godfather: no I'm hungry fuck you
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