BPsycho2 wrote:Looks good.
Night Immunity, Packs up and leaves town after goal complete. Money is made. Win.
oliy wrote:Okay, I came back to this after commenting earlier.
Here are some suggestions I'm making:
-Change the color - It looks extremely similar to Witchand my Gravedigger
-Fix some of the grammatical mistakes, such as "If you buried"
-Change "After your goal is met, you will leave the town" to "After you meet your goal, you will commit suicide"
Technetium wrote:I like this idea. It's truly Benign and doesn't have to take a side to win.
But keep 6 Feet Under as requiring 6 wins.
TehLonelyNinja wrote:If the Undertaker were to fail to bury someone due to Doc or BG, would that drain his burial charges? Or would it be like SC2 mafia and not deplete?
DankaldTrump wrote:oliy wrote:Okay, I came back to this after commenting earlier.
Here are some suggestions I'm making:
-Change the color - It looks extremely similar to Witchand my Gravedigger
-Fix some of the grammatical mistakes, such as "If you buried"
-Change "After your goal is met, you will leave the town" to "After you meet your goal, you will commit suicide"
1. I think the color is fine as it stands, if the devs put this in the game, (which I hope they do) and don't like the color, they can change it, the issue of color is not important honestly.
2. Mistakes happen, I will go over the OP and fix any I see.
3. Nah, it's the same thing mechanics-wise ( except for no last will, but a U.T doesn't really need to keep one) and it winds down to the same thing. I envisioned the UT to not be one that is suicidal, but rather just slightly depressed and just needs to get away from normal life.
oliy wrote:DankaldTrump wrote:oliy wrote:Okay, I came back to this after commenting earlier.
Here are some suggestions I'm making:
-Change the color - It looks extremely similar to Witchand my Gravedigger
-Fix some of the grammatical mistakes, such as "If you buried"
-Change "After your goal is met, you will leave the town" to "After you meet your goal, you will commit suicide"
1. I think the color is fine as it stands, if the devs put this in the game, (which I hope they do) and don't like the color, they can change it, the issue of color is not important honestly.
2. Mistakes happen, I will go over the OP and fix any I see.
3. Nah, it's the same thing mechanics-wise ( except for no last will, but a U.T doesn't really need to keep one) and it winds down to the same thing. I envisioned the UT to not be one that is suicidal, but rather just slightly depressed and just needs to get away from normal life.
1) NO COLOR IS A BIG ISSUE IT'S WHAT IT'S SEEN AS ;_;
2) Ok
3) What you have will leave the players in question as to what it means, or at least some, so simplify it to something all players can understand.
Kirize12 wrote:I still support this role.
Kirize12 wrote:I still support this role.
Kirize12 wrote:I still support this role.
oliy wrote:Me too.
Still the color should be changed, it's like having a role the same color as Jester, is that what the role will really be seen as?
It would just make players understand it easier, so they don't get confused.
oliy wrote:This and Witch don't have as much variety as EXE and Vampire, and yes, people have made suggestions to change Vampire, so this is my suggestion color just for recognition in role ideas. Yes, it is black. No role is black, its simple, different, could be argued for dirt and gravestone color, and it would work.
Kirize12 wrote:The color is fine. Oliy, stop.
oliy wrote:Kirize12 wrote:The color is fine. Oliy, stop.
It's the same color as Witch, or at least fairly similar. I also don't want my Gravedigger color to get stolen as it's considered a good role.
Izzip wrote:Cool role. Seems challenging, but since when is that bad? ;p
oliy wrote:Don't worry, I know
I get overly defensive about my roles, and Gravedigger is one of my best, and it has a chance of making it into some FM game, where Stalker is already Black. I can't think of other colors of roles I used to replace it it without being too similar, and Kamikaze likely won't go anywhere.
oliy wrote:Don't worry, I know
I get overly defensive about my roles, and Gravedigger is one of my best, and it has a chance of making it into some FM game, where Stalker is already Black. I can't think of other colors of roles I used to replace it it without being too similar, and Kamikaze likely won't go anywhere.
Technetium wrote:oliy wrote:Don't worry, I know
I get overly defensive about my roles, and Gravedigger is one of my best, and it has a chance of making it into some FM game, where Stalker is already Black. I can't think of other colors of roles I used to replace it it without being too similar, and Kamikaze likely won't go anywhere.
You could say the Kamikaze idea...crashed.
*CSI theme plays*
DankaldTrump wrote:Oh gosh, please don't........
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